Score: 10

"Nice melody!"

submission: The Travel to Polaris (CUT)

date: November 4, 2009

5'd, DL'd.

I know this review isn't terribly constructive, but it's a top notch piece :D

Score: 7

"No hihats? C'mon!"

submission: Banjo Kazooie Rap Beat

date: August 21, 2009

I was expecting a good funktastic beat to come in about halfway, or atleast some kind of change - but alas, the same kick and snare over and over again. Good concept, but needs work.

Score: 9

"Rad!"

submission: p4c-Sometimes I Forget

date: August 15, 2009

I'm digging the percussion and melodic riffs here.

Only complaint would be the mastering (especially of the lower end) - the bass 'falls out' and could use a firmer kick as well as some better stereo panning on some of the instruments.

Other than that, this is a pretty sweet track!

Score: 0

"Garbage."

submission: autotuned flowers

date: July 23, 2009

I'm not sure how you keep getting BOTW with sub-par submissions like this.

At any rate -

I guess you're making these in an effort to be funny, and while the portal was never made to showcase pointless humor (rather, music for flash games) I find it irrelevant as this doesn't even successfully have any good humor.

The technical quality is pretty bad - you clearly have no idea how to use Autotune, and probably less of an idea of FL.

You obviously took your idea from the show "Fone Jacker."

I'm pretty much done with this review. You're at rock bottom.

If you'd like to improve, you can always try reading up on basic music theory and production. There's your constructive criticism.

Score: 10

"Love it!"

submission: Burning Tears

date: July 15, 2009

As i've said before about Sorohanro being my favorite for jazz on Newgrounds, you're definitely my favorite for piano pieces!

Keep it up!

5'd!

Score: 1

"You have.."

submission: [KKK99] step off motherfucker

date: June 23, 2009

Quite the potty mouth for someone who is believed to be ten years old.

Aside from the unnecessary cursing, your rapping is offbeat, there is an absence of melody, and all of the samples here sound straight from the FL packs.

A word of advice: try and make something as good as you can. Then, set it aside for a couple of days and listen to it again and try to improve on it.

Also, reading up on some music theory wouldn't hurt. A good place to start would be with "Scales," "keys," and "chords."

Hopefully you'll be on the road to improving in no time.

Score: 9

"Smooth and relaxing, but not as melodic enough"

submission: Feels Like Meh (NG Cut)

date: June 17, 2009

Everything here is absolutely perfect except for an absence of a strong melody (atleast imo.)

I do like the kick you mentioned in the description, nicely done!

Anyway, this was a great track. 5'd, downloaded.

Score: 10

"5'd"

submission: MH16: Playing In The Sand

date: March 16, 2009

This is a nice, happy song!

I could easily see this as BG music in a game or something.

One thing that bugged me though was that the more mono-center instruments were too loud. (Personal preference, though.)

Other than that, nice work!

Score: 10

"5'd"

submission: Deep Inside (W.I.P)

date: March 16, 2009

A nice, dark piece you've got here.

I like the gritty feel with the noise in the background and the synths.

Nice job!

I agree with Codomis, keep it as is.

Score: 10

"5'd"

submission: Filigree

date: March 16, 2009

Very relaxing tune you've got here!

Only complaint was that perhaps the hats were a decibel or two too loud. But of course, that's a personal preference.

At any rate, keep it up!