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Good song, but there were a couple minor things that bugged me:
Additional panning effects on the "rock the place (bass?)" one shot vox would be a neat addition. The overly right panning got kind of irritating.
The lead is great, but for some reason I kept expecting to hear the melody play a DIFFERENT note on the fourth beat of the first measure in the first half of the chorus. That probably doesn't make too much sense, but it made me cringe for some reason. Of course that's just a personal preference.
This is definitely an original-sounding song in the realm of hands up, so that's good!
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
"This beats gonna rock the place, beatsource coming steady gonna pump up the bass!" :)
I have SOME one shot vocals here though, i sliced alot of vocals and also used the Impact effect in VEC3 that sounds like an impact vocal.
Hah yeah i totally get what you mean on the melo man x) I mean. i dont feel the same way about this exact melo, but i totally get you!
Thanks a bunch man :)
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Nice!
What a great reviewer I am, eh?
No but really, this is damn legit, son.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, thanks for listening.
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I absolutely love the experimental styles used here. Definitely a trippy song.
Probably my favorite part of the song was the guitar in the "foreground" that sounded as if it were far away. That's a neat trick.
As far as vocals, I think the guy below me nailed it.
At any rate, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I'm quite glad you like it.
I think I may redo the vocal track sometime, I completely agree with you guys.
Thanks again for the review!
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I like the melodies here, really great.
One thing that bugged me though was the peaking and clipping with the higher piano notes. Try adding a compressor on the piano's master channel so that they never pass -0db.
I like the use of the pad and the piano though, that was a pretty clever combination!
One final thing I would suggest is to use more reeverb and delay. They make a world of difference.
Anyway, thanks for the heads up, and let me know when you submit more!
Author's Response:
woow :p nice review :D
thank you ;-)
uuhm, ok i'll try :p, there will come certainly another version of this one, in one of these days when i got nexus :p , then i'll look at what you've said ! ;-)
uuhm, on what should i use more reeverb and delay ? what part? just on piano? or on the pad ?
Thanks man! awesome review :p ;-)
Grts
Fredgy
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'Cept it went:
Here I sit, all broken-hearted
Tried to shit, but only farted
Then one day I took a chance,
tried to fart and shit my pants.
Cheers
Author's Response:
well, people tend to change things as time goes by, its a classic bathroom graffiti, i've seen it in like four places, all different versions.so i made up my own.
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Good melodies and riffs. That's a plus.
I would have to agree with the review below - while it's a good start, I can easily pick out a bunch of FL samples. Don't worry, that's not a bad thing, but keep on messing around with the VSTs and whatnot.
Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Ya, I know what you two mean. I didn't take AS much time with them as I could have. And funny you mention FL presents haha cuz this was the first time in a while that I used them XD I usually use samples I got elsewhere. But ya, I will see about sprucing them up a little bit. thanks =]
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Here's my constructive criticism/review:
The piano at the beginning could use some reeverb and delay effects.
There's minor peaking when the saw synth comes in around :50. The melodies and harmonies are pretty good. Could use some more EQing and mastering work, though.
Other than that, it's pretty good. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
thanks for checking out the song :D happy to see you got my PM! Thanks for the constructive criticism, Helth just PMd me saying how amazing it was that you reviewed the song... lol :D
Thanks for the review!
Your Fellow Newgrounder,
-gamerworld14
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Simply brilliant.
Fantasmical.
Orgasmical.
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That was too good. I hope someone makes a flash accompanying this - that would be epic.
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"Some good ideas, but needs MAJOR tweaking"
First off, let me say I cringe at your choice of chord progression. You couldn't have used ANY others? This whole idea of transitioning to the fifth that is constantly used in dance songs is overrated and abused beyond belief.
That being said, while this isn't a dance song in the slightest, I still can't say I enjoy hearing the same musical idea in a different genre.
Secondly, the orchestral voices you are using are painful to listen to. Obviously i'm going to be biased since i'm using a relatively similar VSTi (unless you are using Edirol as well, as I noticed several familiar sample stock sounds like the drumroll, gong, et al) but seriously. They sound shrill and synthetic.
Thirdly, your melodies have NO dynamic range. They do not convey crescendos or decrescendos and anyone with a musical background will notice that these lines sound static and plain when they should sound dynamic and flexible. The tuba hits in the slow section are particularly out of place. They have too hard of an attack and take away from the plucks.
On a final note, you should realize that i'm going to criticize you as harshly as possible, as you are my competition. Please take what i'm saying as a way to improve. That being said, this is a fairly good piece of work, but at the same time needs a great deal of improvement.
Thanks for reading and please feel free to critique my work and the other contestants'! :]
Author's Response:
Cheers man, to be honest that's the first brutally honest review I've ever had, and I thank you for it!
I will definitely take this stuff on board, and study some more classical music too ;)
All the best, and good luck! :)
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