Score: 5

"That's too bad."

submission: Half Beard theme

date: October 23, 2007

I enjoyed the excellent flash much better than this. 5 for funny.

Score: 10

"Acid at its best"

submission: Raving Mad

date: October 23, 2007

Am I trippin'?

Score: 10

"Nice live work"

submission: Unmanned

date: October 23, 2007

You know your recording. The song also stays true to the ambient feel. Me like. The reversed parts and phaser worked VERY well! The guitar also did a nice job in there too.

Favorited fo sho.

Score: 5

"Keep working at it."

submission: Dismal City Below

date: October 23, 2007

You're almost exactly like I was when I was first using FL. Give it some more time, you'll get better, I promise. One thing I recommend is to try and reproduce music on FL. Meaning take a song you are familiar with, and just try and "remake" it in FL, then just mess around with different melodies. Keep it up, bud.

Score: 7

"Isn't 3/4 great?"

submission: The Mystery Man [DA]

date: October 23, 2007

But it's not for this song. You have an idea with that background melody in 3/4, but it would be much better syncipated. (3-3-2)

If you DO want to do some 3/4 stuff, I would recommend a ballad or piano music. Trance 3/4 is just too hard, but if you could make it work, i'd like to see it.

Score: 8

"Hmm"

submission: =Numb/Encore (Shade45 Remix)=

date: October 23, 2007

I'm not completely clear on the rules, so take this lightly, but I believe the lyrics are extracted from the actual song, right? If so, I would be wary. Again, just a heads up.

On the other hand, this song really is very, very original and creative. On a gen remix scale, all my 10, bud.

Score: 7

"Good concept"

submission: Crunch

date: October 20, 2007

Though the other reviews do give a valid point that synth guitars get dull very fast (I myself use them a lot, and am constantly trying to tweak them to sound more realistic because, like you, I don't have a very good recording device) I believe this would be a good base chord concept. With a little solo dubbed over it, it would suit well.

Score: 9

"Excellent driving song"

submission: Drop Zone: The Return

date: October 20, 2007

That may sound strang, but I downloaded this and put it on my iPod. I found that it's an excellent song to listen to when speeding through the night.

The only thing I would suggest is a little more variation with the melody. The song itself is really quite good, just maybe some more chords.

Score: 10

"Good shit"

submission: Endless Abyss

date: September 24, 2007

You know your trance, this is by far my favorite on NG. It's like a jungle-sky-night theme. Excellent work.

Score: 10

"Original still is the best"

submission: (((Mellow2)))

date: September 24, 2007

You've got a creative song here, nicely done.