Good idea, but falls short
The concept is great and even some of the animation stands out above average. However, some scenes are sub-par and could use minor tweaking in order to improve a great deal (the opening office scene for instance - very rough and not very well drawn.)
The biggest flaw of this is the voice recording. For their purpose, they fit. However, because you recorded this on a dinky mic and did not edit it very well, it becomes very annoying hearing the white noise pop in and out whenever the vocals take place. Thankfully, not very many pops or peaking.
The flash was great, but if you watch until after the credits, it replays without any sound.
Perhaps a replay button would fix it? Not sure.
Mc-Victory = Fail
This was obviously a mock-anime, and it worked perfectly. Everything from the shoddy lipsyncing to the incredibly outrageous names of techniques was excellent.
That's a lot of pluses.
A lot of my friends would laugh at me for taking interest to this, but I feel no remorse, this is really mature, well-done flash.
Sure, it's not the best, but it's damn close. And the moral behind the story is so much more worthwhile that Mario's and Penis's and what have you.
That was very fuuny, good jorb!
Please make more in the series!
This was very funny/random. Good jorb.
Lol, finally someone liked it!
Random comedy all the way.
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