Good idea, but falls short
The concept is great and even some of the animation stands out above average. However, some scenes are sub-par and could use minor tweaking in order to improve a great deal (the opening office scene for instance - very rough and not very well drawn.)
The biggest flaw of this is the voice recording. For their purpose, they fit. However, because you recorded this on a dinky mic and did not edit it very well, it becomes very annoying hearing the white noise pop in and out whenever the vocals take place. Thankfully, not very many pops or peaking.