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Location: University of Oklahoma
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It's not great technically speaking, but I would assume you're just starting out, which is perfectly okay.
Some of my earlier stuff was the same way.
Musically it's intriguing, though.
Just keep at it and keep experimenting!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I am just starting out. I'm glad you think that I have potential!
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...so mesmerizing.
The ambiance here is very well done.
Musically, it's wonderful, a couple technical issues here and there, but nothing that damages the aesthetic entertainment.
Good work, and keep it up!
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Thank you for your review, it means much to me ;)
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Good thumping bass, and a lot of diversity here!
One thing I would have liked to see was a little more growth and development, but to be completely honest, that's just my opinion, and certainly not something to hold against you.
So technically speaking, this song is great. The melody reminds me somewhat of an 80's song mixed with fantasy?
Yeah lol.
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Thanks for the review homie!
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Jesus.
How does this song only have a 4.0?!
This is excellent work both musically and technically. Good work, mate.
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Musically it's fine, but everything is too loud, 'specially the drums. There is clipping throughout the song.
Try lowering the volume of everything, and then adding a compressor to limit the frequencies and then raise the bass (this will make the bass louder without peaking.)
Other than that, good show
Author's Response:
Ok, i'll try to do! :)
Really thank you for the advice, ;-)
and thanks for listening :)
Grts
Fredgy
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Everything is great, so be prepared to hear a lot of IMO stuff..
-Could use a bit more master reeverb (though I suppose I love reeverb)
-The clap and up hihat sound very shallow, perhaps stereoenhancing/delay?
-The guitar sounds very shallow as well, perhaps delay?
Those are just some things to keep in mind, perhaps experiment with them. If you don't like the change, don't keep it, as I said; all IMO.
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This is a good start to something very moving, here a few pointers on improving the technical side so as to support the musical side:
Add stereo-enhancing, reeverb, and delay effects - these will add a richer sound to the track. The piano is a bit dry and obviously computerized because it lacks these elements.
EQ - The track itself is very bright, compress the upper end of the sound spectrum and enhance the lower end. Make the kick louder
Finally, it feels very top heavy as there is no bass. If a bass was playing alongside the kick it would be much, much more powerful.
Oh, and to ensure a more appropriate listening audience, make sure the genre fits the song. For this I would have classified it as either hiphop or miscellaneous.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
About that: "Oh, and to ensure a more appropriate listening audience, make sure the genre fits the song. For this I would have classified it as either hiphop or miscellaneous."
Sorrys, I'm bad with that xD, I never know what genre are my song :S.
Thanks for the coments, I'm not english so I'll try to understand what are you saying to try to use it, actually I cant modify that song :/.
~Bru2712.
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This has both a musical and technical wonder to it.
You've definitely got something good going here.
Hopefully we'll be seeing something like this on the EP! :P
5/5
Author's Response:
Haha ye im still working on the one for the EP its almost finished =).
Thanks for the review man!
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I especially liked the little video game sounds dispersed near the end - they added a nice touch!
My only complaints are that 1. i'm starting to hear a trend of the synths in your songs, namely the leads and 2. the main lead sounds very monophonic. Perhaps needs more reeverb? I noticed this as well with "Haunting."
Other than that, it's great.
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That's a great feel you've established with the piano and then the booming kick and bass. I like :]
And yeah, it does remind me of Harvest Moon 64 as well.
Keep up the smashing good work!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks :) You keep on rocking too!!
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